Running the German through a word counter, I get 48 words of praise (toward the beginning) and 166 of criticism/attack. I counted the last section about resting in peace as neither.
Certainly inappropriate after someone has just passed away. We all know what your criticisms are and they can be alluded to if you don't want your text to read an an unequivocal endorsement of everything you do.
Quantitatively speaking, only the first one and a half sentences are a positive appreciation. The rest is neutral or a criticism of various actions of the bishop.
Qualitatively speaking, the disproportion is even greater, because the first one and a half sentences do not recognize any actions/merits of the bishop, but list characteristics that he in a certain way "inherited" from his parents. So while not a single positive action is listed, many negative actions are mentioned.