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My first english poem
« on: January 29, 2010, 06:14:14 AM »
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  •   It fitts better into Resistance movement section. I don't post it in user poem's thread, because if a discussion follows, it would be offtopic for that thread.

      On the wings of brain
    It is a sad story hear hear
    the account of what costs us so dear
    We are a suffering nation a religious one,
    you can blame on mollahs what you have done.
    We want to have nothing in common with cats,
    nor to do that which is for dogs and for rats.
    We are made to think and to argue,
    to study and research for all things new.
    So from the tip of the mountains of knowledge,
    where we glory in our schools and college,
    where we are trying to do something human
    to be totally a brain not a man or a woman,
    we fell into brothels, fell lower than the demons
    we carry dirty clips saved in our cell-phones.
    reaching your puberty is a sin to avoid,
    better to be gender-less till 17 year old,
    So you can study your math with a better mind,
    you can learn physics and things of this kind.
    Woe to a girl who has it at 11,
    when she should be concerned with papers and pen.
    she has to wait for decades and decades,
    till her youthful bloom wanes and fades.
    First have your diploma them your BA,
    then have a job so that you can pay.
    graduated? it's too soon still,
    beauty standards must be fulfilled.
    go on a diet till you are slim,
    subsribe also in a baseball team.
    woe to a man whose wife is fat,
    he will fall into sin, that is that.
    It takes 2 years till you lose enough weight,
    by the time you are almost 28.
    for in addition to all that stuff,
    you have to learn about rogues and puffs.
    get rid of your acnes by creams and laser.
    noroush your nails and hair locks later.
    A man without such a wife is prey to devil,
    So, do all of this if his good you will,
    Now it comes to learn etiquettes.
    how to treat people, flowers and pets.
    wait till you are perfect and blameless.
    with no pride no anger and not jealous.
    kill sloth, gluttony and all the vice.
    Since they can kill your marriage all at once.
    now you are thirthy. is it the time?
    It is your summer and gone is the prime.
    then it is the time to go take a course,
    In marriage clasess with good grades ofcouese.
    to see a conselor to teach you about life.
    to learn the equality between husband and wife.
    At last your patience is rewarded at 33.
    In the same age they crucified the three.
    Now all psychologists tells you to wait,
    to know each other before procreate.
    "sorry ma'm you have a bad disease.
    you have to use this drug for your health and ease.
    Don't get pregnant for a year from now,
    or else the child's IQ will be very low".
    By the time you have finished the ordeal.
    you are 35 and that is all.
    You have to forget about motherly joy.
    to have a little girl or a baby boy.
    35 is high risk doctors say so.
    fructomy's good children are a no no.
    It is all the price we have to pay.
    to compete with the west, it is our way.
    then VOA and BBC will congratulate.
    a nation whose women they did educate.
    "we are humans free from the body.
    only for the brain, mind and study."
    To do away with God, morals and babies.
    to give us technology freedom and ecstacies.
    I will weep for you my dear land.
    I will be your jeremias, God take your hand.    


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    « Reply #1 on: January 29, 2010, 09:45:51 AM »
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  •  :applause:


    Offline spouse of Jesus

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    « Reply #2 on: January 29, 2010, 11:36:09 AM »
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  •   I made some spelling errors. ofcourse not ofcouese, and some other errors, though I revised it more than once.

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    « Reply #3 on: February 04, 2010, 09:44:32 PM »
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  • Nice!  :applause:
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    « Reply #4 on: February 05, 2010, 02:19:24 AM »
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  • Here is me reading this poem:

     :reading:

     :laugh1:

     :shocked:

     :applause:

    It started out charmingly goofy with that first line "On the wings of brain," became intriguing, and then ended on a high note.

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    "To do away with God, morals and babies.
    to give us technology freedom and ecstacies.
    I will weep for you my dear land.
    I will be your jeremias, God take your hand."


    AWESOME.  And if the poem was no good, I would have not said anything at all, as I don't flatter people just because they are of the fair sex.  

    Those Americans who think Iran is some kind of alien, foreign hive should read this.  It sounds like Iran is no different than the West.  That is because all nations have fornicated with the harlot America.  

    Did that make me sound like an imam?  You sound American, I sound Iranian!
    Readers: Please IGNORE all my postings here. I was a recent convert and fell into errors, even heresy for which hopefully my ignorance excuses. These include rejecting the "rhythm method," rejecting the idea of "implicit faith," and being brieflfy quasi-Jansenist. I also posted occasions of sins and links to occasions of sin, not understanding the concept much at the time, so do not follow my links.


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    « Reply #5 on: February 05, 2010, 09:06:55 PM »
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  • It seems the difference is that here marriage is more in the "do whatever makes you happy" category. It's having children before you meet all of the necessary requirements that's the big no-no.

    Nice poem, Spouse.  :applause:
    "I think that Catholicism, that's as sane as people can get."  - Jordan Peterson

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    « Reply #6 on: February 06, 2010, 12:55:28 AM »
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  •   Thank you all!
    Some one needs to make a man's version of this poem! :laugh1:
      We have more sorrows in common than joys. :scared2:

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    « Reply #7 on: November 27, 2011, 02:00:45 PM »
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  • bump.  Have you written more spouse?  That was very good.