Texana, you're free to write to them yourselves.
You seem to be missing a key ingredient in your analysis. Pope Leo XIII taught that even though the essential form was corrected, the context and intention of the rite is still not Catholic, and therefore this did not rectify the situation.
This same argument could easily be applied to the Novus Ordo Orders, but those considerations are passed over by those who claim that NO Ordinations are valid.
You conveniently stop at paragraph 26, but continue reading from 27 on and Pope Leo explains this.
Dear Ladislaus,
The only reason Pope Leo XIII is even using this line of explanation ab adiunctis is that: "27. In vain has help been recently sought for the plea of the validity of Anglican Orders from the other prayers of the same Ordinal.
( It was already established by Pope Julius III and Paul IV and Pope Leo XIII that the form was invalid, and then some theologians came up 'recently' with a novel idea)
For to put aside other reasons" ( i.e. Sacramental Theology that never teaches that the validity of the sacramental form can be supplied by the surrounding text) "when show this to be insufficient for the purpose in the Anglican rite, let this argument suffice for all."
So Pope Leo XIII is not affirming that the adjacent text could validate the form; from No.27-32 he is just saying that even this argument is useless.
In No. 28, Pope Leo shifts the argument towards the intention. He acknowledges the required change in the essential form, but questions what these correct words mean. And finally, in No.31, the Pope says : "For once a new rite has been initiated in which, as we have seen, the Sacrament of Order is adulterated and denied, and from which all idea of consecration and sacrifice has been rejected, the formula, "Receive the Holy Ghost", no longer holds good, because the Spirit is infused into the soul with the grace of the Sacrament, and so the words " for the office and work of a priest or bishop", and the like no longer hold good, but remain as words without the reality which Christ instituted."
Therefore, the essential form fulfills by itself the requirements of Sacramental Theology; however, what it says has a non Catholic meaning, which Pope Leo affirms in No.33. "...On this principle rests the doctrine that a Sacrament is truly conferred by the ministry of one who is a heretic" (which was proven in No.28 to 32) " or unbaptized, provided the Catholic rite be employed." So here the intention is already wanting, because manifestly a new non Catholic book is used. Then the next sentence is proving that the intention is not only wanting but adverse.
Yes, Michael Davies is wrong. The essential form is correct. At the time of Pope Leo XIII the surrounding prayers were not corrected. Were they corrected since then? Nowhere in Sacramental Theology is it written that if the essential form lacks one of the elements needed for its validity, it could be supplanted by adjacent text. What Pope Leo said is that the adjacent text can invalidate the form by showing that the correct words do not mean what they should, and this pertains more to the intention, not the form itself. But at that time it was already a useless exercise, because of No. 26.
Sorry for that long-winded explanation, but it is important.
I will be sure to share if Brother Dimond responds to me.