"Freedom isn't Real"
"Freedom is the greatest lie,
for we all serve something
For some it's the call of gold
and other pleasures of flesh.
For others it's the call of Christ,
through marriage and holy orders.
As for the rest, they listen to the quiet whisper
of Lucifer in their ear.
Quietly instructing them how to shine
his unholy light upon this world.
He shows them things
not meant to be seen.
And they pass his visions to earth,
corrupting many who have seen.
Freedom isn't real, for don't you see?
Humans always kneels at somethings feet.
The only choice we really have,
is who's feet we are kneeling at."
I thought of this rough draft back in my days at a public school. The idea hit me while my teacher was teaching us about free choice and not judging people. So I share it with you guys in hopes for some constructive criticism and your opinions. Please be honest too, I don't want a bunch of false praise if it sucks.