Author Topic: User Poems (Read 155701 times)

soulguard · « **Reply #55 on:** January 22, 2014, 02:10:55 PM »

I see before me two ways
while a choir sings with a haunting harmony
One leads to a road with infinite choices
all of which are for indulgence
a million short roads
once traversed
always despised

the other road leads to the clouds
and requires me to rise above myself

Which one shall I chose
for the million roads surround me
or will i close my eyes to the choice
and seek the road within?

In this lies transcendence.

soulguard · « **Reply #56 on:** January 25, 2014, 10:33:44 AM »

What do people think of my poems?

shin · « **Reply #57 on:** January 25, 2014, 03:14:45 PM »

Hmm. I think the third one is the best. :smile:

s2srea · « **Reply #58 on:** April 02, 2014, 06:23:59 PM »

Oh Most Blessed Virgin,
Star of David, Morning Star,
Hear the Cry of your People,
And be thou not too far.

He saw most fit once before,
That your presence would announce,
The coming of Our Savoir,
And His Sorrow in the Mount.

Come once again Mother most pure,
Star of the morning’s first light,
That your people's suffering,
May soon cease upon your sight.

Not Our Lords name used in vain,
Nor self-righteous pharisees,
Will peace bring the Church once more,
Like your sweet image with our King.

1st Mansion Tenant · « **Reply #59 on:** April 04, 2014, 02:23:42 AM »

Quote from: soulguard

What do people think of my poems?

I liked the first one