Yes, I did compose it. Thank you for your compliments. And yes, I posted it before. (Twice?) I like to post it during the month of the Poor Souls, just as a reminder. :wink:
But what I would like to do (as with another of the poems I posted) is a little exercise in critical thinking...
I am inviting everyone, for a moment, even if you liked it, to put aside all good manners, and to look at the poem again, and see if you can tell me what about it is actually good, and what about it is actually bad.
I'll give you a hint... unlike with "So You Thought", much of what's wrong with this one is wrong in a slightly different way. Can you tell if it's different in a good way, or a bad way?
Feel free also to tell me honestly how you think it is better or worse than the others I posted. I would like to see if everyone can pinpoint the good and bad in these two poems.