He botched that worse than Bp. Webster considering Bp. Slupski skips words entirely (such as "instructum") whereas Bp. Webster, for all his faults, at least said every word.
With regards to him turning around and reading the book closely after finishing the preface (which includes the sacramental form at its conclusion), those actions would be expected for him to do so (without an MC) because at that point of the mass the rubrics state for him to turn around and go back to the altar, so he's almost certainly reading the rubrics which is why he's spending so much effort doing so in order that he knows what to do next.